Be sure that you are writing slices of life, something that happened to you. A small moment. A slice of life is NOT telling about something you like or something that you have like a toy.
Also, make sure that you are doing your best writing. Telling what happens bit by bit. You should be writing more than just one or two sentences!
Miss you all!
“I’ll push you!” Brady says, jumping off his own swing to go behind Troy.
“OK?” Troy responds, doubtful of how this is going to work.
He “pushes” and Troy starts to move, in large part because Troy is making it happen with his feet. The swing and the much larger child start gaining some momentum. Unfortunately, Brady’s timing is a little off…and…Whack! Brady goes flying backward into the wood chips.
We all laughed and Brady picked himself up out of the chips. No big deal for this kid. But it did change his focus a bit…
“I’ll throw this at you,” Brady says with a mischievous smile, gathering dirt and wood chips in this hands…